Qualities Of An Independent Man-a poem

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By CMCastro

Like a Redwood,STRONG, FIRM, AND DETERMINED NEVER TO FALL DOWN.
Like a Redwood,STRONG, FIRM, AND DETERMINED NEVER TO FALL DOWN.
Such an independant man
With an independant plan
He can take care of himself
With the help of No one else.

He never explains his ways.
Yet with reverence 
to God He prays. 
Only to realize 
No one is perfect,
Not even him.

Such an independant man
He struggles for his place
In the human race.
He has found out on his own
That he is not alone.

Destined to be different 
From all the others
In a family of many 
Sisters and brothers
Soon this Independant man
Will see
The Lord's Peace
Will set him Free.



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Judicastro profile image

Judicastro Level 1 Commenter 21 months ago

Voted up and beautiful. Great writing cm!

Ken R. Abell profile image

Ken R. Abell Level 2 Commenter 21 months ago

Evocative & thought-provoking poem. Thank you for it.

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breakfastpop Level 8 Commenter 21 months ago

Strong and meaningful piece of writing.

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